Abduction: A Mpreg Yaoi Alien Romance Kindle Edition

What did I just read... and why was it amazing. Creepy, scary, kinda gross, but amazing. I'm not stranger to that BL life and have seen my share of human v. Alien interactions, but when I tell you I will never watch the movie Aliens the same, this book is to blame. If you want a very educational look at an inter species relationship that starts out kinda enemies to lovers but ends with a HEA but also containing gender altering, M pregnancy , large eggs and happily ruined neather regions, you got yourself a 5 star book!!! Bravo Miss Rae. Ya got me as a fan!!!

This little novel really hits about every kink in the YAOI alien tentacle mpreg genre and it is glorious for that. I much prefer larger stories with lots of character development and shifting plots and locations but this was still a nice little YAOI story with good, kinky sex. It also delves a bit into the psychology of the YAOI D/s relationships which is really nice since when I try to explain the genre to others they are aghast at how...rapey... it is.My only complaint is that there is very little to distinguish the human male in the relationship from a female, especially after his body modification. There is A LOT of emphasis continually placed on his new female sex organs during the sex scenes to the point where you kinda begin to wonder what the point of this being a YAOI story is (but not enough to make the story bad or anything). The fact that the man even has a penis is only mentioned a couple of times and the fact he loses half of his male genitals is barely touched upon. I mean really, I know this is written by and for women but a man who loses his testicles is going to have a pretty big psychological crisis. There is plenty of other original fiction in this genre out there that covers this kind of body transformation and resulting psychological arguments better. And, I guess this is where a YAOI manga and a story can reach audiences differently as a manga will still give you the visuals while the descriptions in a story are left up entirely to the author and what their focus is. And really the only reason I bring any of this up is BECAUSE this story itself delves into some of the other psychological aspects of the D/s and YAOI relationships.Still, there are enough emotional twists and kinky sex to be well worth the price and I still love this story for generally covering every major kink (some that I like and some that I don't) in this sort of sub-genre and the fact that it is still well-written and characterized despite the focus on the kinky sex is definitely an achievement.

As I start reading the first chapters, I was worried this might not be a good story. The habit of yaoi-fans to use Japanese names, somewhat indicates to me a copy-cat (along the side that I do not enjoy the constant use of Japanese names in the boy-love genre). This story though, proved to be not such a case.The story is not that novel: Nice looking young man, lost in space, taken by aliens and becoming their breeding machine -- no spoilers here! The point was how this author would sell it to me. She did well!The alien is presented in a way that arouses and questions my standards for beauty. The boy’s body alterations (yes, I think readers should know that the boy will become a hermaphrodite; some will be turned off by this; others, such as myself, were pleasantly challenged by it) questioned my standards even further. The author puts a lot of good effort in detailing the way the two protagonists view and perceive the world, their relations, their moral standards and their logical processes.Will the boy get in peace with his new body; his fate as an alien incubator; overpowered by a creature far more evolved in matters of strength and intelligence, yet aesthetically much displeasing to the human standards of beauty?The author makes a good job answering all those questions in a detailed way; without too much needles info. She takes us by the hand and drives us through the story, explaining in quite a detail how things take place and why, while at the same time not laboring the point too much from sex scene A to sex scene B, giving us time to build up… anticipation and arousal.At the end, while nearing the final pages, I was feeling satisfied, and surer for the five stars I was about to give.To conclude: This is not high-class literature; it’s smut! Yet, in the genre of smut, I consider this one to belong to the high-end of the spectrum and of good quality. You’ll get horny, and you’ll get answers about the hows and whys of the heroes. Isn’t that enough by itself?

Firstly, the basis of the story, the plot, was an interesting one. It had a very good start to it that was enticing and draws you in. Very well done. However, the biggest flaw this book has is once it gets to the point of that main part of the story the language is so course, repetitive, over used, and cliche that it breaks the ability to keep the mental picture and smoothness and elegance of the story going. An editor for the book is a MUST, and that is for any book. Using synonyms and other adjectives that will keep the story flowering in the proper rhythm is a necessity to keep the reader interested. Once the book hit the point of 'Oh Lord here we go again with the cliches and SAME verbiage all over again,' I quickly lost interest and actually skipped a whole paragraph because of it. That is what needs to be fixed for this to be a good book worth keeping. Otherwise it's mediocre at best currently. Overall the author is decent. As I mentioned before the plot itself is a good one for a short novella read. But it needs to be edited, rewritten, and then republished to make for a better book overall. The same adjectives will turn off a market audience faster than you can snap fingers top gain their attention. Best to find new ones to use interchangeably, and that doesn't mean only using two or three. Five or more is best for effective writing.