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E**T
Needs dramatic editing for everything.
The story is a little better than so so. Like many of Ms Dusk's stories this one is very rushed. The personal descriptions of anything not a sex act is not existent. Characters nearly blend together awkwardly. It takes a couple of reads to tell who is doing what to whom. The protagonist shows no personality traits. Asks no questions about the traditional mcguffin. There are whole sections that feel like the story was rewritten by committee. They lack a singular voice or tenses radically change.The spelling errors halt the flow of story entirely because there are so many.
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