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C**R
Hurt my brain trying to read this "book".
Seriously, trying to read this collection of words which had so many grammatical, spelling, and punctuation errors hurt my brain. I could not finish reading it. Is this a seventh grader's attempt to get published? I am glad, however, that I did not pay for the book. I would be demanding a refund. Ouch!
K**R
I didn't like this book
Only read 36 percent of the book before giving it up. The writing is very stilted and the numerous grammatical, punctuation and other errors constantly stop the flow of the story.
J**E
ANTHONY STONE... the name was giving me headaches!!
I could be wrong, but I'm guessing that this is an Anthony Stone book. I know that because the writer repeated his name, his full name, EVERY SINGLE TIME. Yep, it got to me. I've never read any Silk White' s books before but if this is the example I won't read another one! She seriously needs a proof reader who can actually spell. The author apparently doesn't know how.
M**E
What a waste of time!
This was the poorest written book I've read in a long time! The editing was obviously nonexistent & the writing couldn't have been worse. There was a story of sorts there, if I'd have been interested in wading through the muck to find it, but with such poor writing & lack of editing, it just wasn't worth it! It was a freebie, so I can't say that some people might not enjoy it, but for me, it's not worth it. There are too many other free ones that ARE good to waste time on crap like this!
R**N
No editing, unbelievable plot points in first two chapters, DNF
This book came up on one of the largest book promotion emails. The summary sounded good and it was free. So I jumped on it without reading the sample.Well, I'm glad it was free. This book has clearly not had any editing, as almost every line of dialog in the first two chapters is incorrect. The author also has not researched the use of weapons. In the first chapter, a woman is standing at her front door when the killer uses an ax to separate the woman's leg.The human body is pretty strong. Yes, you can separate a leg with an ax, but not with a woman standing at her front door. The ax has to contact something after hitting the leg, and even so, it would have to be a very, very sharp ax.Two chapters in and I just couldn't keep going.
A**R
Pointers
Usage of STONE's complete name made it a bit redundant. There were several grammatical errors etc which to me seemed as though the work had not been proof read. Story content/theme were pretty well developed but inconsistent at the end when the plight of Mom Brown left me hanging.
T**I
Do not waste your precious time on this drivel.
I received this book for free, in exchange for an honest review, and quite frankly, I have had two hours stolen from my life that can never be recovered. I can say honestly that this is one of the three WORST books I have EVER forced myself to finish, if not the worst. To call the author's writing amateurish is an insult to amateurs everywhere. The writing is akin to a six year old dictating a C grade cop/slasher movie to their seven year old sibling. The author has no concept of any type of law enforcement or legal procedures. Quite frankly, this work would probably be graded 'F' as a first draft in any basic creative writing class, and the instructor would have done the literary world a favor by permanently forbidding the offending student from ever committing words to paper (or the web) again. Save yourselves. It's too late for me.
L**D
Using the full name Anthony Stone every time time was beyond tedious. The writing was just a jumble of words ...
As others have said, not well written at all. Using the full name Anthony Stone every time time was beyond tedious. The writing was just a jumble of words with too many errors to count. The idea has merit, however the author does not know how to express ideas. Glad I paid nothing for this book.
M**N
Disappointing writing of what seemed like a promising story.
So disappointed and I'm only two chapters in. The writing is awkward and forced so it reads like a lab report. Names are overused and the main character gets referred to by his full name at least twice per paragraph.The premise really intrigued me but I don't think I'll make it through the full book.
D**A
Facile and poorly written
Total facile rubbish. If this took the author more than 2 hours to write I would be very surprised. Very poorly written, excessive use of the name of the main character and repetition of many phrases made this one of the worst books I have ever read. Do not buy under any circumstances. It would not allow me to rate no stars hence 1.
F**E
Hilariously bad
Easily the absolutely worst book I have ever read, and I must've read thousands in my life... terrible grammar, punctuation, spelling, sentence construction etc etc. The plot is so full of holes that the Jumblies wouldn't even have set sail in it. In case you forget the main character's full name it's mentioned at least twice per paragraph, and sometimes the paragraphs are virtually repeated on the same page, just the word order changed a bit. I only read to the end because I got a perverse kind of pleasure from just how terrible it really is. I thought it was written by a young teenaged girl, but when I got to the sex scene I realised it had to be a male... Probably a teenage boy. Don't read it, even for free as I did, unless, like me, you will find it amusing as well as intensely annoying
E**7
Needs work
Great premise but terribly basic, more s thesis of A story. Could be an amazing thriller the bones are there but the flesh is missing. Sorry. And it was 2 stars
R**K
Virtually unreadable ...
I'm about 20 pages in and have given up - does no one edit this stuff? It might well be a good story but I don't think the author has ever heard of a pronoun. The main character's name seems to appear at least twice in every chapter. I just need to find out how to delete it from my kindle.
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