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D**S
Superb story
This could well rate as the best erotic story I have ever read. Realistic characters. Believable scenarios. Authentic dialogue. Yes overall it's a little beyond what you may find plausible in your life but who knows about someone else's life.I think too it could be fascinating to see this same story written from the viewpoint of Laura and Freddy and see inside their minds and emotions
A**C
okay
The best hot wife stories are those where the scenario and hot wife are each plausible, neither was here. Gave this three stars because, notwithstanding all the implausibility, I thought the last couple of chapters were a good read - probably because by then, and for the first time , all the protagonists were having to deal with reality.
A**Y
Not A Good Experiment Max
As Max admits this book was an experiment, and like all experiments there are failures like this one. Hopefully you'll return to your usual excellent form too. The story is contrived to say the least and involves quite a bit of twisting to get it to work, and to be fair it was working until you made Anna a complete sub to Jimmy. At that point it lost credibility. Up to there it was Anna pushing the 'relationship' along, she made the first move on the kiss, the first move in the sex and then we are to believe she's actually a sub who eventually will only have sex with her husband Freddie if it's OK with her lover Jimmy?? No, sorry, lost me at that point.
K**S
Brilliant
I have always liked books by Max Sebastian but this one was exceptional. It was a brilliant change to the normal with so many twists and turns. I loved it and found it difficult to put the book down until I had finished it.
A**R
Brilliant twists and turns that keep you guessing, wonderful realism and an ending to die for
One of the best I've read for many years - it has all the feel of the real world with all the excitement of the life we all wish we could read. I couldn't put it down.
K**R
Excellent
A cracking story I think I knew it hoped it would end and glad that it did I always like nice endings and this one is reat
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