The Mafia King: To Insanity
K**H
Grabs the attention of and grasps and doesn't let go
This book was extremely well done. I did not do any background research on the author but since she is roughly early 20s and studying to be a nurse some of the minor errors in her writing were easily overlooked. The way she grabs your attention and hooks you onto it is incredible. I was so hooked emotionally as well because of the rawness of reactions and interactions within the characters was so good. I was heartbroken at one point while reading (not giving any spoilers away) and it just shows how well the writing is and how it transformed the reader to become attached to certain characters. Very well done cannot wait for the second one!
L**O
fantastic read!
The character development was excellent! The storyline was great! The book had me on the edge of my seat the whole time, and I’m extremely excited for the next book!
K**S
Grammar errors
It was an amazing book to read but some of the Grammer errors made it hard but I kept in mind that it's self published and really interesting
K**9
Lots of typos and errors
I am about 25% percent of the way through the book, but the typos and the way some of the sentences run together and jump make it hard to grasp what is going on. I am loving the story line and characters. But the errors and missing pieces of information make it hard to enjoy throughly.
K**A
love love love
Love this so much, couldn’t put this book down! Seriously love the twists and turns that happened, especially the many love stories
M**M
Gift
This was a gift. It was worth the money.
D**A
I love this book so much I bought the second one
I kid you not I read this in 2 days. That’s the fastest I’ve EVER read a book and I loved it. I HIGHLY RECOMMEND
C**S
Great story, needs some work
I think the story line is great and very enticing to readers! However, the grammar errors and pacing need some work. Cleaning up the story and making it flow a little more would help tons! I really enjoyed the characters and the general story line, I think it has lots of potential to be amazing!!
F**A
Amazing
I loved it. It was everything.I will miss Vincenzo and Isabella😭😭😭. I need book 2 now. I suggest you get ready for a thrilling Rollercoaster of emotions and the fact she is a strong female lead 💪 👏
G**L
AMAZING!
Wow wow wow! I loved this book so much! So many twists and turns throughout the plot, it had me in tears, laughing out loud. Truly worth the read!!
K**R
Exciting
The plot line is exciting and super dramatic but that telenovela type you know it's trashy but can't help yourself and need more too fill that empty hole.Dialogue feels a bit forced and youngAnd sometimes the character build dialogues gets a bit jumpy but definitely not so bad that you don't enjoy the characters FMC is a freaking boss I love her shes seriously just a no b.s kinda gal and I love that for her MMC is pretty cool too but we didn't really get as much of him as her in this one even tho it was dual pov I think this book was more centred around her
M**H
Really good, but needs some editing.
The book is really good, and the plot and story are awesome, but the book need some major editing done.
D**H
Hard to read
I was really excited to read this one after hearing so much about it.Truth, I made it about half way, dnf.The writing is confusing at best, the spelling...lets not go there.And, what bothered me the most, the inconsistency of the characters, especially the FMC, badass at one second, a scared mess the next, cool and in control here, loosing her shit not a second later... Sorry, that was hard to read.
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